The rank stench of dead bodies and oil from the bots permeated the air. The screams of my teammates dying, gunshots, explosions and the crowd pollute the air with noise. This was my 7th game in the arena. My soul was hardened by death and battle. I was in the Hotshots, an Assassin. Mute by choice. Same with all the other Assassins. It's the only way we can express our anarchy in this autocrazy. We were dueling in the arena called "Ammo Mule". Micky Cantor started to blurt out advertisements for disgusting products designed to push the work force to it's limit. I took a deep breath, my mask started to warm against my lips. I could feel my heart beating against my chest like a jackhammer. A sniper in the distance, next to the enemy's side of the base was controlling the lane. I activated my cloaking device, and gracefully dodged the bullets and rockets until I reached him. I've recognized were Snipers like to put their traps, so I avoided the jump pad and used a smoke bomb to hide a jump up to him. I ran up to his back, clutching my blade in hand, I stabbed him in the back, piercing his flesh. From all this fighting, I got a thrill, a high from the hunt. The roar of the crowd and the squeels of the Sniper made my body numb. An Assault and a Support saw my act, and came for me. I used my genetically engineered acrobats and made a quick escape back to our base. It's short but I didn't have to much time.
The mood conflicts too much for me. The MNC world is light and humorous, and your story is the complete opposite.
Ya, I have a dark writing style. I like the dystopian, wasteland, and survival setting. Plus I thought it would be fitting because it's the Assassin.
While it is short I did on some level enjoy reading it. I also have thoughts about a sort of Fan-Fic of my own. If I end up working on it I think I too would post it. Also as some one who works his 40 hours and works out six days a week I feel your pain.
Nicely written, i like fan fic. makes me wonder what someone would feel like after winning the contest to be bullseye lol