I'm so cold

Discussion in 'Monday Night Combat Art and Fiction' started by Totally Not Grec, March 9, 2011.

  1. Totally Not Grec

    Totally Not Grec New Member

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    (Told from the perspective of a dying assault)

    Yeah the bottom line is it ain't fuggen right
    I've beat them up they fuggen guts bust inside
    Cause you see I'm what? A soldier, see I'm a problem.
    But there ain't a man in the world that can solve us
    Ya, I feel like a young prize fighter with a gun...
    Cats, my style's sounding celibate



    I wish I could use the F word. Anyways the point of this was to see if I could make a rhyming MNC poem. I'm really getting into rhyming like a wordsmith or a lord's list...ok that was bad.
  2. DeadStretch

    DeadStretch Post Master General

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    Ehh that was decent. i just don't think it fits the Assaults style all that much.
  3. Totally Not Grec

    Totally Not Grec New Member

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    Ya, probably too gangster or street. The assault is a rich athlete.

    I'm new to rhyming in poems, and I've listened to too many rap songs.

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