Hey, i read the back storys and they are pretty good! i was thinking though it would be good if there was another reason why the facions want control over systems other then just looking to find the progens. what i was thinking was somthing along the lines of, the commanders/faction leaders uses fuel gathered from stars to create new commanders, this would mean that in essence the inital leader would concer 1 system then use that star as a way to fueling broken commanders and creating new ones, it also means that the fights are really ove control of the star and thats why noone cares if planets get blown, as long as the suns intacted the winners happy. i also think this would lead the way better for the whole concer and expand exponetially idea behind the robot armys, at the moment the commanders sound a little bit like scavengers and not so much like the allpowerfull robot killing machins they are. it also means that the 4 faction leaders are the only original commanders to survive the progens attack, and all the commanders they repair and build are reprogrammed to serve there faction leader.
