A short story by me

If you've got time to waste, I've recently found a short story I wrote a few years ago. I decided to use it and put it on my blog after rewriting parts of it in better English. Please let me know what you think, either here or on the comments on the blog itself!

http://a-wanderers-soul.blogspot.nl/2014/07/wolf-in-agony-short-story-by-me.html

Not bad.

But, please... learn the difference between "to" and "too".

Thanks. English isn't my native language, it's not always apparent what goes where lol. Had my trouble learning the difference between then and than too.