A Valiant Battle

Discussion in 'Monday Night Combat Art and Fiction' started by TOM12121112, July 2, 2011.

  1. TOM12121112

    TOM12121112 New Member

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    Brothers in arms, fly my flag in your valiant pubbing escapades,
    and in your epic battles against other clans! Show your belief regarding this
    great famine that is upon us! When you are questioned of your motives by the
    various randoms roaming the lands, win or loss, you must tell them the story of
    how you and your brethren were starved by the gods: how they let you down and
    refused to feed you; instead giving all of their nourishment to the "greater race."

    Tell the story of a beautiful world known only as MNC. This world appeared to
    many in a dream involving an arcade in the summer. The world was lush and full of
    excitement and joy to all who entered. Of course some did not stay, but those of us
    who decided to take residence in MNC were nothing but thankful to the gods regarding
    their gift of this beautiful new world.

    On top of the world they give us, they promise to make every job equal,
    and every town fair to both races that inhabit it. The gods took some time to deliver
    on this promise, but it was kept nonetheless. soon every job in this world was nearly
    balanced and fair; or so it seemed. Some people took notice that the occupation of
    assaulting became more rewarding than the others. Soon they called for a gift from
    the gods.

    Then there was the "gift" so called "spunky arena," that which turned out to be something
    to trick us into giving them our trust and endless obedience whilst they devise a plan to
    create a superior race, better than us in every way. This spunky cola arena was
    something the gods sloppily threw together, along with a handful of fixes regarding
    their misdoings in this world we live in.

    Soon the population took notice of the gods' plan to make a superior race,
    who the people called the Peaseers, and were fine with it, so long as the gods
    did not forget about those who came before the peaseers, and who had given
    them the support they needed in the first place.

    This promise was broken however, and many decades were spend, wondering
    whether or not our gods would ever get around to supporting the first race. they
    gave excuses and toyed with our emotions regarding the subject, while never
    directly answering our pleas for help. We are the Forgotten Ones.

    Now my brothers, it has gotten to the point that the superior race themselves
    take pity on us and try to help us in our war against the gods, so that our friends,
    brothers, and sisters do not starve at their hands. we must stand against them
    and wave our flag of rebellion to the powers that be so that we may be this
    famine and be at peace with those who created us, and get the acknowledgement
    that we deserve.

    Someday, your childrens children will look back from their halo 6, dub edition and
    say; "that was my grandfather, the one who stood against the gods the great
    MNC update famine," and you will live forever in the minds of those to come.

    signed by yours truly,
    [4GOT]TOM12121112
  2. DeadStretch

    DeadStretch Post Master General

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    Im Hudson New Member

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  4. DeadStretch

    DeadStretch Post Master General

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    Hudson, you must pull yourself away from the darkside and remember where you came from!
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    ZOoo00OOm New Member

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  6. JackTrips

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    This is the worst MNC fanfiction I've ever read. Where's the sex?
  7. JON10395

    JON10395 New Member

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    When I click on your signature it just brings me back to the top of the page. That's cool, I guess...
  8. DeadStretch

    DeadStretch Post Master General

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    Support this thread by linking it in your signature!
  9. The Dude 421

    The Dude 421 New Member

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    Brilliant :D
  10. TOM12121112

    TOM12121112 New Member

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    You guys like my story?! Cool! I like the part where the gods totally **** over the 4GOTen ones!
  11. Rev Rabies

    Rev Rabies New Member

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    Tom I love you
  12. Vlane

    Vlane New Member

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    Btotstns.
  13. jaysofacton

    jaysofacton Active Member

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    This is, however the best non-fiction I've ever read. I can see it being made into a documentary.
  14. Deadpool FTW

    Deadpool FTW New Member

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    Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
  15. NeoCyberman

    NeoCyberman Active Member

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    A hint biased in my eyes.
  16. TOM12121112

    TOM12121112 New Member

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  17. TankShadows

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    Anyone else get hints or Anthem by Ayn Rand or Rush's 2112 overture in this?
    Also that was pretty damn epic right there
  18. Ekanaut

    Ekanaut Uber Alumni

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    *sigh*

    What the people call gods have other gods to answer to and alas their decision making is out of their hands and a sense of urgency does not exist for these god-gods.
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  20. vortexcontinuum

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    WHY DO YOU WINK ALL THE TIME

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